Concept Art A Drawing

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  1. Tatsuya

    Tatsuya Treasure Hunter Adventurer

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    Here is a drawing of Kirito. I decided to spend more time cleaning this one up than the previous sketch I did.
    Don't have an idea for the background, so I left it a light blue. Criticism welcome.
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    It was a great improve from a sketch, but the problem is the shoulder. Well you know what they, practice makes perfect. Keep it up!
     
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    Thanks; are you referring to the left or right, in respect to our view point?
     
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    Both, but the left one needs more attentions.
     
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    I see, thanks. I'll try to fix it in future drawings.
     
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    For some reason it reminds me of "Blood Lad" because of the color and the hair i think o.o but i think its a good drawing especially the jacket, tho the arm looks a bit funny, but that might be because the jacket would fold when holding the arm in that position.
     
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    What I think is missing is the shading. But overall is great! :p
     
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    Looks great at first glance but his left arm looks a bit out of place and his right one needs to be made smaller in the lower part and his biceps is kind of awkward. Hope you can fix it because it will look great if you do ^^
     
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    Thanks for the compliments; as for the pose, I tried my best to shape as closely to a real life pose as possible (using a mirror). I don't think I will fix it as I am satisfied with the outcome.
     
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    May just be me. The drawing is nice, but I think the strap that holds together his tunic needs some depth. Because when it goes around his outside it just forms with the cloak. It seems sorta painted on. the object is thick and deserves some value :p
     
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    I feel that a bit of shading would really bring this piece together. If you were just going for a simplistic style drawing then it's great for the most part. The strap could use a bit of work, as in how it would tighten the jacket around it's edges. Also the sleeve at the wrist from that angle would be more one sided. It would be against the wrist on the one side.
     
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