Writing 【V̶i̶r̶t̶u̶a̶l̶ Reality】(Chapter 9 released!) - AoA Fanfic

Discussion in 'Share your own project' started by Kathrall, Jun 15, 2015.

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Are you reading the story? (just to know how many are actually reading)

  1. Yes

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  2. No

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  3. On-hold

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  1. Cillin

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    Your story came back up out of the blue lmao, keep up the good work man
     
  2. Kathrall

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    Yeah got in the mood to work on it so hopefully people continue to read
     
  3. Kathrall

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    Chapter 9 Released!

    As always please feel free to give me any feedback, criticism always appreciated :)
     
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    Erm... wasn't the enchanted weapons explained a few chapters ago? Explaining it again in the almost exact same way again just throws me off.
    Edit: I guess this wasn't explained in a different chapter but I am certain I've read the exact same line in another story.
     
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  6. Kathrall

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    it was explained, but the time gap of a year and a half fucked with my memory, so when the time came for the more recent chapters I was out of touch with it and fucked some stuff up so I edited it out of the old chapters to add it into the newer chapters since i cucked myself by not reading through it before re-writing
     
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    Oh. Ok.
     
  8. Cillin

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    Great job as always, loving the longer chapters!
     
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  9. Kathrall

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    thnx qt
     
  10. Kathrall

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    Story cover added, yet another amazing illustration by @Shijohane
     
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    Age of Aincrad is a MMOARPG, not an MMORPG. [Chapter 1, line 3.]
     
  12. Kathrall

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    Bruh if it's VR it's not gonna be called that lmao
     
  13. gmunga5

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    Unfortunate to see that you appear to have removed the story. Was looking forward to catching up on the two chapters you released while I was away.
     
  14. Kathrall

    Kathrall YGO 2015 1st Place Red VIP Veteran Knight Young Knight Seasoned Adventurer

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    I'm not sure what happened honestly. I just came back to look at the story since my hard drive got ruined and I lost all the files of it I had. Wattpad either deleted my account or changed it in a way I can't access it anymore.

    Thankfully, I uploaded the story to another website so if you still wanna catch up here's the link:
    https://www.royalroad.com/my/fiction/11109